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René Alfons

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René Alfons

Post by Sprw201 on 13/10/2017, 03:33

A/N: I am a girl role-playing as a boy so if you have a problem with that please let me know and I'll just change all the pronouns really quick. Also I am drawing a head-shot of my character, so I may update this later.

Name: René Alfons

Age: 20

Group: Survey Corps

Rank/Profession: soldier

Appearance:
Height: 5' 11" (180.34 cm)
Weight: 125 lbs (56.70 kg)
Eyes and Hair: Dark brown eyes and brown-red hair that goes down to the tips of his ears.  
Facial Features: Freckles across his nose, and a small gash in his left ear. Has some stubble across his chin, but only enough to form a small shadow.
Eye-wear: reading glasses

Identity:
René tries to always hear both parts of the story when available and find the best possible outcome to benefit both parties. He sympathizes with people a lot, especially if they are at a disadvantage and tends to be duped easily. Tends to overthink things when angry or stressed and cannot be left alone in the dark. Not very trusting due to various betrayals that occurred in his youth. (See backstory) has the ability to crack down on perpetrators especially when they have done something ethically wrong. Is very serious in a work setting and is both an introvert and extrovert. It depends on the day really. Believes that political views don't matter when compared to personal views. Specifically is very strong minded with the fact that most people don't consider everyone's feelings. Is strongly against animal cruelty and prefers that an animal and human must always be in a partnership instead of just taking control. If he had the choice between listening to your boring opinion about tomatoes and going out to chop his arm off, he would most likely choose the later. More of an observer than he is an active part of the conversation. This can prove to be very useful during scouting missions, where this observant man gets to help his teammates more than he can tell that he does. Is terrified of the dark for "irrational reasons" (See backstory.) Tends to hold back on what they have to say for fear of getting rebuked for being bold. Overall has a strong desire to help someone, no matter the situation.


Preferences:

-Likes: René loves a good story. He'd sit down and listen to whatever anyone is saying and be genuinely interested. He also enjoys carrying around a small sketch book and a piece of graphite to sketch things that he sees outside the walls, sometimes including titans, it helps him release the stress from the day. He also enjoys tinkering with pieces from fallen or lost 3DMG. As written earlier, he does place a high value on trust and 'proper' ethics.

-Dislikes: Absolutely hates it when people ignore him in a conversation that he started. Is not particularly fond of the arrogant individual or the bragger, hates the bitter taste of coffee.

-Fears: Absolutely hates being left alone, especially late alone at night. has a fear of losing his friends because of a mistake he made.

-Goals: wants to publish his sketches to the general public and help educate those on the inside about what the outside world looks like. He also wants to help restore the walls and peace to humanity, after all, that's why he signed up.


Backstory:

René came from a humble beginning in Trost, from parent's who could not always afford the best. He wasn't poor but certainly not rich. When he was around the age of nine he was moved to was Maria to live with an uncle for unknown reasons. He hasn't heard from his parents since. His cousin, Cindy taught him how to draw and he has been doing it ever since. When he was 10 his uncle tried to kill him in the middle of the night. His uncle was prone to drinking for extended periods of times. Cindy shoved him out the door in the middle of the night. She didn't rejoin him. René ran for as long as he could, eventually collapsing from exhaustion near a Scout Regiment outpost. The soldiers that found him, took care of him until he was old enough to begin training to join them. He wanted to repay them and help humanity after he lost his only shot at humanity. René discovered that he needed reading glasses during his training, and requested a pair which came in within two months. In his training, he did make two friends, Ana Zealia and Winston Anson. These were the people that he enjoyed playing chess with, which made his tactics stronger through practice. They were the only people he talked to, that is until they died before the graduation. René wasn't at the top of his class, but he was certainly smarter than average. Out of 275 graduates, he graduated 7th in his class and chose the Survey Corps as his occupation. He started by doing maintenance work on the gas tanks and 3DMG. Soon after, he was able to move up to learning and making tactics. After the graduating class came in, He went out on his first mission. Many of his class did not come back after that. Not because of titans, well not more than expected, many actually died due to a gate malfunction, crushing 10 soldiers and 1 support cannon. After 15 missions, René Soon after, he was able to move up to learning and making tactics. After the graduating class came in, He went out on his first mission. During this first mission, René was taxed from a lot of running (he lost his horse) and barely made it out alive. Afterward he requested to be trained specifically in running and started doing so daily.  After fifteen missions René was able to rest easily for a while. But there really isn’t any rest in the Survey Corps is there? People were constantly asking him about their 3DMG. He would always refer them to those doing maintenance, though since he spent a long time doing it himself, he sometimes offered better advice than the newbies. An underling of René’s challenged him to a duel, with real weapons. It was stationed for an alleyway in the middle of the night. René showed up and whipped some sense into him. There were never any more problems from that underling anymore.


Stats: 

Strength: 6
Agility: 8
Intellect: 8

A/N: Finally done! Can't wait to start roleplaying. Just gotta work out how the transition will work right? (that or start a topic, joining one is easier.)

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Re: René Alfons

Post by Herdir on 13/10/2017, 15:14

APPROVED


Great work conceptually. I'll admit, the english is not the best, but it's definitely not the worst either (the actual amount of mistakes I've spotted is 0, which is the new record). Just as a tip though: don't be afraid to venture into more complex sentences due to fear of making mistakes. It'll help you improve greatly.


Well that being said I make it sound bad. The character is great, and the writing conveys any questions I'd have had about the character. Backstory is interesting, even somewhat unexpected.

Have fun roleplaying!

P.S.: Yeap, just work out the transition. Usually you don't even have to ask the person first, actually. (check the first post in the thread just in case though)
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Re: René Alfons

Post by Sprw201 on 14/10/2017, 02:17

Glad to hear that this got approved so quickly! Thank you for the tip, it's good advice. I was actually aiming for my character's backstory to be a bit unexpected.

I'll see you in the role-play!

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